the chart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
the given
pie charts illustrate the percentage of Verb problem
The
the
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apply
water
that is
consumed for various purpose
by six Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
countries
.
overall
, the percentage is divided based on the three categories that are industrial use
, agriculture
use
and domestic use
. The four countries
are highly consuming water
for agriculture
among six countries
. The consumption of the water
is least for domestic usage in all six countries
.
firstly
, Central Asia is consumed
more amount of Wrong verb form
consumes
water
for agricultural purposes
with
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at
other
two Change preposition
for other
purposes
are less than 10% of consumption. The high utilization of water
for agriculture
from
ranges between 80-85% are two Change preposition
apply
countries
that are Africa and South Asia which are 84% and 81% respectively. However
, other
two Correct article usage
the other
purpose
are less than 15% in both cities.
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purposes
Furthermore
, the
South America utilizes Correct article usage
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high
amount of Add an article
a high
water
in agriculture
sector with 71%, 19% in domestic Add an article
the agriculture
use
and 10% in industrial use
. In contrast
, Europe and North America are highly
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are highly using
use
the
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water
in
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for
Industry
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Industrial
purposes
with 53% and 48% Whereas
one
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a
forth
of the Correct your spelling
fourth
water
for agriculture
and less than 15% of water
for domestic purposes
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, countries, use, agriculture, purposes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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