The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentages of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.

The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentages of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.
Illustrating in two graphics is information comparing the proportion of the
book
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books
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that
was
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were
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borrowed in terms of categories from four distinct village libraries between June and September and the
amount
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of
books
these libraries lend during the same time period. From an observational perspective, fiction
books
were the most favorable among readers
whereas
the opposite was true for self-help materials.
Additionally
, West Eaton, Sutton Wood and Church Mount witnessed an upward trend
while
Ryeslip experienced a downward trend. Regarding the pie chart, fiction
books
dominated other sections with 43% which is almost 2 times greater than that of biography
books
(19%). Following up
was
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history and science
books
, both of them saw an equality in the rate of borrowing with 14% each.
Lastly
, only 10% of the public
borrow
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self-help
books
. Turning to the line graph, Sutton Wood started at 250
books
in June before increasing slightly by 25
books
in the next month.During the
last
2 months, the number of
books
borrowed for Sutton Wood dropped significantly to 100
books
but rapidly rose and reached its peak at 300
books
.
Similarly
, both Church Mount and West Easton stood at exactly 50
books
in June and climbed up to 150
books
in September.
In contrast
, there was a continuous decrease in Ryeslip’s figures, from 300
books
to just above 150
books
at the end
of the timeframe.
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