The charts illustrate four types of destination including part-time work, voluntary work, further study and unemployment that graduate and postgraduate students did after leaving the university in 2008.

The charts illustrate four types of destination including part-time work, voluntary work, further study and unemployment that graduate and postgraduate students did after leaving the university in 2008.
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The bar diagrams present the volume of four different paths, excluding full-time work, that both British graduates and postgraduates apply for in the year 2008.
To begin
with, the number of graduates applying for
further
study in 2008 was a gigantic 29,665 followed by part-time jobs with 17,735. The unemployment career came in third place and represented 16,235,
finally
, the voluntaries accounted for a meagre 3,500. What is interesting to note is the first and the
last
place
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were different by approximately 9 times.
Additionally
, postgraduates around a gigantic 2,725 chose to continue their studies and part-time work was different from the first group by a minuscule 200.
Furthermore
, unemployment and voluntary work remained at the same place with 1,625 and 345 respectively. What is surprising to see is postgraduates seeking
for
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the job were more than volunteers by 5 times.
Overall
,
it is clear that
students are interested in
further
study and they are not keen on doing voluntary jobs.
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