The graph below shows electricity production(in terrawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012

The graph below shows electricity production(in terrawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012
The given chart illustrates the amount of
electricity
produced in France over a period of 32 years. It can be seen that
,
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the
electricity
production by nuclear was the highest compared to that of other
resouces
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resources
,
whereas
this
figure for renewables was the lowest during the period shown. In 1980, approximately 120
terrawatt
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terawatt
hours of
electricity
was produced by thermal power,
this
figures
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for nuclear was the same as that
of
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hydroelectric about 50
terrawatt
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terawatt
. Renewable energy provided a negligible amount. One year later, nuclear power overtook thermal energy as a primary source of energy. From 1980 to 2005,
electricity
production from nuclear power increased significantly and reached a peak of 430
terrawatts
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terawatts
terra watts
.
By contrast
, renewables produced the amount of
electricity
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unchained and
then
witnessed a slight increase in the
last
7 years to 25
terrawat
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terawatt
hours. The production of
electricity
from hydroelectric and thermal sources varied gradually between 50 and 70, 120 and 50 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity with synonyms.
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