The graph below shows electricity production(in terrawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012

The graph below shows electricity production(in terrawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012
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The given chart illustrates the amount of
electricity
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produced in France over a period of 32 years. It can be seen that
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the
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production by nuclear was the highest compared to that of other
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resources
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figure for renewables was the lowest during the period shown. In 1980, approximately 120
terrawatt
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terawatt
hours of
electricity
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was produced by thermal power,
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figures
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for nuclear was the same as that
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hydroelectric about 50
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terawatt
. Renewable energy provided a negligible amount. One year later, nuclear power overtook thermal energy as a primary source of energy. From 1980 to 2005,
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production from nuclear power increased significantly and reached a peak of 430
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terawatts
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, renewables produced the amount of
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remained
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unchained and
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witnessed a slight increase in the
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7 years to 25
terrawat
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terawatt
hours. The production of
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from hydroelectric and thermal sources varied gradually between 50 and 70, 120 and 50 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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