You have just been offered a place on a short training course in a small seaside town where a friend of yours is living. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: 1. Greet your friend and tell your friend the good news 2. Ask your friend about life in the seaside town 3. Arrange a time to meet your friend before you start the course
I hope you're doing well, i'am
exicited
to inform you that Correct your spelling
excited
i
will move to your Change the capitalization
I
seasise
because there is something Correct your spelling
seaside
i
have to do there.
how are you? long time no see after Change the capitalization
I
graduate
from University. Change the verb form
graduating
i
would like to tell you some information regarding of training that I will do in your hometown next week on Change the capitalization
I
sunday
.
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Sunday
therefore
, i
want to know about how to Change the capitalization
I
life
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live
in
a small seaside which I have never Change preposition
on
gone
there, and Verb problem
been
this
is my first time to live
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living
in
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on
seaside
. Correct article usage
the seaside
that is
why have to know some information about Correct article usage
the atmosphere
atmosphere
and network Correct article usage
the atmosphere
that is
very crucial for me who is always Wrong verb form
needed
need
for working.
when I arrive might be Wrong verb form
needed
arround
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around
at
07 pm, I Change preposition
apply
decide
to meet with you first as I don't know the directions and require Wrong verb form
decided
to
guide me Correct pronoun usage
you to
arround
there. We can meet at Correct your spelling
around
Airport
before going Correct article usage
the Airport
to
anywhere that you want to invite me.
Thank you so much. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon
Your Sircenly
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apply
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coherence cohesion
Work on improving sentence structures and grammar to make the letter more coherent.
task achievement
Try to provide more specific details about your training course to make your purpose clearer.
suitable writing tone
The letter conveys your excitement and intention to meet your friend effectively.
complete response
You have organized the letter in a way that covers all required points.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.