The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. How Glass is Recycled

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The given illustrations depict the information about the industrial process of

glass

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recycling.

Overall

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, there are five steps total from disposing of the

glass

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to delivering it to the markets. It is clear from the pictures that

the first step is

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to throw the used

glass

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bottles in a bin.

Secondly

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, the litter collector takes

this

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in a garbage truck and sends it to the treatment plant where it can be recycled. The third step is cleaning and sterilizing the waste bottles in a machine. The fourth step is demoulding, crushing the

glass

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with a pressure machine and at a certain heat it is about to melt.

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, the melting material is poured into moulds for appropriate shape and all

this

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is carried out by in moulding machine. After completing all five steps the

glass

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bottles are ready to be used. Packed in the factory and loaded in the van to despatch it to the super stores

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words glass with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

157 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

diagram
recycled
stages
collection
waste glass
sources
bottles
jars
windows
transported
recycling facility
sorted
color
processes
cleaned
impurities
labels
caps
crushed
cullet
raw material
melted
furnace
temperature
molded
new glass products
distribution
consumers

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