The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. How Glass is Recycled
The given illustrations depict the information about the industrial process of
glass
recycling.
Overall
, there are five steps total from disposing of the glass
to delivering it to the markets.
It is clear from the pictures that the first step is
to throw the used glass
bottles in a bin. Secondly
, the litter collector takes this
in a garbage truck and sends it to the treatment plant where it can be recycled. The third step is cleaning and sterilizing the waste bottles in a machine. The fourth step is demoulding, crushing the glass
with a pressure machine and at a certain heat it is about to melt. Lastly
, the melting material is poured into moulds for appropriate shape and all this
is carried out by in moulding machine.
After completing all five steps the glass
bottles are ready to be used. Packed in the factory and loaded in the van to despatch it to the super storesSubmitted by seharfazal9 on
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