The diagram below shows the water cycle

The provided illustration reveals the reproduction of

water

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in nature.

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,

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sophisticated consists of 4 main steps which focus on forming clouds from

water

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vapouration before undergoing

precipitation

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the precipitation

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stage and the

water

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is

then

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loaded

to

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into

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the ocean where the cycle is repeated.

Initially

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, the heat from the sun encourages the

water

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vapouration which precisely 80% of the

water

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is derived from the ocean. After being vapoured, the

water

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is condensed in the air to pave the way for cloud formation. Afterwards, the

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is going to be dropped down on

ground

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the ground

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by either rain or snow.

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, the snow is covered at the top of

mountain

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the mountain

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which runs off the surface to blend in groundwater. Alternatively, rainwater

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falls

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down into lakes prior to being absorbed by the groundwater. Eventually, the groundwater passes through the

imprevious

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impervious

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layer of the earth before reaching the ocean

in

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apply

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which

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where

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the saltwater intrusion

is occurred

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occurs

has occurred

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.