The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013
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Presented for consideration is the given bar chart pertaining to the proportion of
Americans
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having meals in junk
food
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restaurants from 2003 to 2013 In general, most
Americans
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went to fast
food
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restaurants once a week, between 2003 and 2006, and once or twice a month in 2013. People eating fast
food
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daily accounted for the lowest percentage in all three years. In 2003 and 2006, more than one-third of
Americans
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ate at fast
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restaurants once a week, but the number decreased to around 27% in 2013. The proportion of
Americans
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consuming fast
food
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once or twice a month declined by 5% during the first three years before rising to 33% in 2013. The proportion of people who had fast
food
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as a meal several times a week fluctuated between around 16% and 20%, and these percentages were slightly higher than the figures for those eating
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food
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a few times a year. Daily eaters and those who had never eaten in fast
food
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establishments before accounted for very small percentages, ranging from just 3% to 5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words americans, food with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food consumption
  • Frequency
  • Dining trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Peak periods
  • Downward/upward trend
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Economic impact
  • Health implications
  • Convenience foods
  • Eating habits
  • Statistical evidence
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Fluctuation
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