The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending in a particular European country was spent on different commodities and services in 1958 and in 2008.

The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending in a particular European country was spent on different commodities and services in 1958 and in 2008.
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The given pie charts illustrate a comparison of expenditure on six distinct commodities and services from 1958 to 2008. From an
overall
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perspective, it is evident that
while
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spending on food, clothing, and entertainment witnessed a decrease, a reverse pattern could be observed in the figures for the other categories. In 1958, the percentage of
residents'
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spending on food was the highest, at 32%. The figures for housing, clothing, and entertainment were lower, at 22%, 18%, and 13%, respectively, compared to 8% for travel and transport. Luxury goods,
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, accounted for the lowest value, at only 7%. In 2008, the proportion of the citizen's budget on food experienced a notable fall to just 12%,
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there was a rise of precisely 32% in the data on housing.
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, 17% of the total money was paid for luxury goods
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travel and transportation. The period between 1958 and 2008 saw a significant decrease in the
expense
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on clothing from 18% to only 16%, and
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was higher than the final figure for entertainment, at 6% by 2008.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • expenditure
  • commodities
  • services
  • necessities
  • luxury goods
  • trends
  • significant changes
  • expenditure
  • housing and utilities
  • summarize
  • highlight
  • primary trends
  • fifty-year period
  • economic growth
  • technological advancements
  • societal values
  • analyze
  • observe
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