The graphs below show the percentage of man and woman aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000
The bar chart gives information about the
proportion
of male
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males
female
aged 60-64 who were Fix the agreement mistake
females
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in four different nations in 1970 and 2000. The data is shown Verb problem
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Overall
, it can be seen that between 1970 and 2000, the percentage
of woman
aged 60-64 who were employed in Belgium and Japan experienced a downward trend, Fix the agreement mistake
women
while
the opposite was true for that in USA and Australia. Additionally
, the proportion
of man
aged 60-64 employed in four countries all saw an upward trend.
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To begin
, the percentage
of female
aged 60-64 employed in 2000 in Belgium and Japan were 8% and 43%, higher than that in 1970 in Fix the agreement mistake
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two
countries, at 7% and 40%, respectively. The figure for Correct article usage
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USA
witnessed a slow growth from 36% to 38%. Correct article usage
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In addition
, the proportion
of female
aged 60-64 applied in 2000 in Australia went Fix the agreement mistake
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to
slightly from 26% to 18%
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male
, the Fix the agreement mistake
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percentage
of male
aged 60-64 employed in 2000 in Belgium and Australia decreased significantly from 79% to 19%, 76% to 47%, respectively. The figure for Fix the agreement mistake
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USA
fell from 73% to 55%. Correct article usage
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, the Change the word
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proportion
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aged 60-64 applied in Japan in 1970 was 74% before reached to 86%Fix the agreement mistake
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