The chart below shows the total number of minutes ( in billions ) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995 to 2002.
Contained in the bar chart is data pertaining to the amount of time of the UK telephone calls by three different types during
eight-year
period between 1995 and 2002. Units are measured in minute billions (Add an article
the eight-year
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).
Overall
, it can be seen that the local-fixed
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call had kept the
similar point at the start and finish, Correct article usage
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whereas
the others had gone up throughout the timeframe. In addition
, mobiles had a significance
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increase making it the biggest difference over the eight-year period.
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line
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detail, it started at about 70MB in 1995, then
gradually increased and reached a peak at 90MB in 1999, but there was a steady drop in its figures and ended at the same point with
the start in 2002. Change preposition
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Besides
, this
type of telephone calls
was the highest figure throughout the timeframe.
Moving onto two different categories in the remaining statistics, where there was Fix the agreement mistake
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a
upward trend from 1995 to 2002. With respect to national and international-fixed Change the article
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line
, it was just under 40MB in 1995 and kept the second highest figure. In the following years, its time slightly rose and stopped at over 60MB in 2002. Regarding mobiles, it started at the lowest point by approximately 5MB in the first year of Fix the agreement mistake
lines
this
period. Much like national and international-fixed line
, it steadily increased in the next four years, Fix the agreement mistake
lines
then
there was a sharp rise in figure and ended at around 45MB, making it the biggest difference.Submitted by [email protected] on
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