The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#consumption #three #foods #wheat #maize #rice #people #four #countries #summarise #information #features #comparisons
The table provides information regarding food
consumption
( Rice
, Wheat, Maize
) in Cambodia
, Poland
, Egypt, and Mexico
. The unit measurements are calories
per person per day
. Overall
, it is clear that
Cambodia
has the highest Fix the agreement mistake
apply
number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
rice
consumption
, while
Poland
has the lowest figures for maize
consumption
.
People
in Cambodia
consume 1445 calories
of rice
each day
. Egypt, on the other hand
, has the second-highest number of rice
eaten by people
501 calories
. While
Poland
has the lowest calorie consumption
of 19 per day
. People
in Mexico
eat only 57 calories
per day
. Moving to wheat, Egyptians eat 1059 calories
per day
which is the highest among other countries, followed by Poland
at 865 per day
. Mexico
comes in third place with 275 calories
that people
eat of food made from wheat. By contrast
, Cambodia
has the lowest floor consumption
of 18 calories
each day
for one person.
Furthermore
, Maize
is popular in Mexico
as people
eat 1083 calories
per day
, and Egyptian people
have 578 calories
per day
. Besides
that cambodies consume 103 calories
of maize
every day
. However
, no one in Poland
eats maize
.Submitted by nidaa_hamed on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
▼
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, rice, maize, cambodia, poland, mexico, calories, day, people with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼