The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in

the production of silk cloth.
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The two diagrams illustrate the
process
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of the production of
silk
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cloth and the silkworms' life
cycle
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.
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, the life
cycle
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of the silkworm is a four-stage, natural and cyclical
process
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and it begins with the moth laying eggs and ends with it as well in a
cycle
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. The whole
process
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lasts between 45 to 58
days
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. During the life
cycle
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of the silkworm,
firstly
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, the moth lays some eggs on the mulberry loaf. After 10
days
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, the egg converts to a silkworm larva that eats the loaf of the mulberry as the food.
Subsequently
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, after 4 to 6 weeks, they produce
silk
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threads and cover themselves with them. After that, it only takes 3 to 8
days
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for
cocoons
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to be produced.
Finally
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, after 16
days
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, a moth gets out from each cocoon and
this
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process
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happens again. To start the production of
silk
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cloth,
cocoons
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are needed. In
this
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process
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, which is a 5-stage, man-made, linear
process
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,
cocoons
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are boiled in a bowl of water. After unwinding the boiled
cocoons
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, each one can give a 300m to 900m
silk
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thread.
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, they should be dyed and weaved respectively to have the
silk
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cloth as the ultimate product.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, silk, cycle, days, cocoons with synonyms.
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