The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
The two diagrams illustrate the
process
of the production of Use synonyms
silk
cloth and the silkworms' life Use synonyms
cycle
.
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Overall
, the life Linking Words
cycle
of the silkworm is a four-stage, natural and cyclical Use synonyms
process
and it begins with the moth laying eggs and ends with it as well in a Use synonyms
cycle
. The whole Use synonyms
process
lasts between 45 to 58 Use synonyms
days
.
During the life Use synonyms
cycle
of the silkworm, Use synonyms
firstly
, the moth lays some eggs on the mulberry loaf. After 10 Linking Words
days
, the egg converts to a silkworm larva that eats the loaf of the mulberry as the food. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, after 4 to 6 weeks, they produce Linking Words
silk
threads and cover themselves with them. After that, it only takes 3 to 8 Use synonyms
days
for Use synonyms
cocoons
to be produced. Use synonyms
Finally
, after 16 Linking Words
days
, a moth gets out from each cocoon and Use synonyms
this
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process
happens again.
To start the production of Use synonyms
silk
cloth, Use synonyms
cocoons
are needed. In Use synonyms
this
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process
, which is a 5-stage, man-made, linear Use synonyms
process
, Use synonyms
cocoons
are boiled in a bowl of water. After unwinding the boiled Use synonyms
cocoons
, each one can give a 300m to 900m Use synonyms
silk
thread. Use synonyms
Then
, they should be dyed and weaved respectively to have the Linking Words
silk
cloth as the ultimate product.Use synonyms
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