The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
pie chart displays the two countries working in three fields, service
, argiculture
and industry. It is clear from the graph that Correct your spelling
agriculture
males
and females
have diffrent
percentages Correct your spelling
different
on
the sectors for Change preposition
in
the
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apply
both
A and B Country
.
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Countries
According to
what is shown, both
gender
in Fix the agreement mistake
genders
country
A and B Fix the agreement mistake
countries
prefere
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prefer
preferred
service
career
. To Fix the agreement mistake
careers
illustraite
, as shown from the figure, 56% of the Correct your spelling
illustrate
male
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males
working
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work
on
Change preposition
in
service
while
49% of the females
.
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do.
Moreover
, 65% of Males
on
Country B are working on services too, and 88% of the Change preposition
in
females
. However
, works
related to the industrial Correct subject-verb agreement
work
males
works higher than the female
in Fix the agreement mistake
females
both
countries, which recorded
by Add a missing verb
is recorded
males
50% , 32% while
the females
8% and 11%.
To sum up
, we could say that both
countries as well as
both
gender
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genders
working
Wrong verb form
work
on
Change preposition
in
service
sectors rather than the
other fields.Correct article usage
apply
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words service, males, females, both with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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