The graph below gives information from a2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projectionsuntil 2030. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a2008 report about consumption of

energy in the USA since 1980 with projectionsuntil 2030.

Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and

makecomparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the percentage of consuming energy in 6 different categories in the
u.s
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U.S
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within a period of 50
years-commencing
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years commencing
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from 1980.
overall
,the highest rate of using fuel can be observed for petrol and oil
while
the opposite can be seen for nuclear,solar and hydropower. all categories have moved upward trend during the period. at the beginning of the period, 35 quadrillion of petrol
used
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in the U.S and
this
number was
7times
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7 times
higher than nuclear, solar and hydropower.
this
figure keeps the fluctuation to get to 40 quadrillion in 2005.
then
this
number
to
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finished at well under 50. natural gas started by 20
quadrillion
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quadrillions
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within 35 years to reach 25
then
remain
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stable for the rest of the year and finished at 25.
in
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1980, the amount
cola
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of cola
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was just over 15 during 35 years
reacing
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reaching
22
than
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then
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it
inreaced
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increased
sharply to
finished
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finish
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just above 30.
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