the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevent.

the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevent.
The charts illustrate the proportion of
water
consumption for Industrial, Agricultural, and Domestic
use
in six different regions.
Overall
,
it is clear that
except the North
America
and Europe where Industrial practices dominated in
this
figure
, other areas dedicated the majority of their
water
to agricultural operations. Looking at the
water
consumption figures of
America
, there is a substantial difference between the Industrial
use
of
water
in North
America
and South
America
, with just above 50% and nearly 10%, respectively. Importantly,
while
the latter dedicated more than a fifth of the resources to agriculture, the
figure
for the former was approximately 40%.
In addition
, Europe dedicated most of its
water
resources to Industrial purposes, the same as North
America
. Notably, the
figure
for domestic
use
was less than 20% somehow the same for these three areas. Regarding Africa, Central, and
South east
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Asia, all showed a considerable
use
of
water
for agriculture with more than 80%.
Furthermore
,
while
the domestic
water
consumption was more than that of industrial in Africa and central Asia with 9% and 7%, respectively, in south-east Asia
this
figure
surpassed the domestic
use
, with a proportion of 12.
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