the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevent.

the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevent.
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The charts illustrate the proportion of
water
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consumption for Industrial, Agricultural, and Domestic
use
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in six different regions.
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,
it is clear that
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except the North
America
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and Europe where Industrial practices dominated in
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figure
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, other areas dedicated the majority of their
water
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to agricultural operations. Looking at the
water
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consumption figures of
America
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, there is a substantial difference between the Industrial
use
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of
water
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in North
America
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and South
America
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, with just above 50% and nearly 10%, respectively. Importantly,
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the latter dedicated more than a fifth of the resources to agriculture, the
figure
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for the former was approximately 40%.
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, Europe dedicated most of its
water
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resources to Industrial purposes, the same as North
America
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. Notably, the
figure
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for domestic
use
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was less than 20% somehow the same for these three areas. Regarding Africa, Central, and
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Southeast
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Asia, all showed a considerable
use
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of
water
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for agriculture with more than 80%.
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,
while
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the domestic
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consumption was more than that of industrial in Africa and central Asia with 9% and 7%, respectively, in south-east Asia
this
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figure
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surpassed the domestic
use
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, with a proportion of 12.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, america, figure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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