The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided illustration shows the process of producing
coffee
and preparation for sale in supermarkets and shops.
Overall
,
this
process is man-made, with 11 stages, and linear, starting with picking the
coffee
beans by labourers and finishing with packing them into jars. It is clear from the process, at
first,
the
coffee
beans are collected by farmers and
then
they are dried with the heat of the sun. After that, the dried ones are roasted by flame in an oven, after that, they are cooled immediately in a cooler, following that are ground in order to create powder. The powder is mixed with hot water in a vessel, and from that, in the straining stage, the mixture is passed through a sieve .
Next,
the mixture is frozen in a fridge, and following that, the frozen liquid is ground, and
then
, the provided ground product is dried in a vacuum system in order to evaporate water.
Finally
, the provided
coffee
is packed into jars and it is ready for sale.
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