Some people think that young people electronic and computer games is helpful while the others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has been an ongoing debate on whether young individuals

entertain

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themselves with online

games

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beneficial or just a useless act. The writer of

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essay argues that entertainment via computers provides many benefits because it aids The intellectual growth of the young and

it

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acts

like

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a refreshment for the

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of the users. It must be recognised that computer

games

does

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help in developing the intelligence of the players as many variety of

games

require to think in order to progress. What

this

mean

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is it will stimulate the young to render creative

remedy

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to solve puzzles in the game.

As a result

, children when encountering a hassle will consider a plethora of ways to solve it.

In addition

to the growth of intelligence,

games

also

assist with the improvement of hand-eye

co-ordination

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since it requires

the

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individuals to constantly look at a screen

while

controlling their hands to achieve a goal.

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has been proven by many scientific studies as non-gamers do not have the capability to multitask

while

their gamer counterparts

excell

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excel

in the objective.

In contrast

, many would argue that electronic devices and

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applications are a distraction and cause severe eye problems. It cannot be denied that sometimes

games

can attract our attention off work and can distore our time perception resulting in procrastination in work and accompanying

that is

the

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of eyesight and can cause astigmatism.

This

may be true but these issues can be negated by just setting up a schedule and a reminder to get back to work. With regards to eyesight, if

use

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correctly

then

computer

games

would cause little to no harm to the eye. It is

also

vital to consider that online entertainments refresh the

brain

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of youngsters as it provides a

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of excitement to relieve stress. Some

games

have songs composed to be as calming and relaxing as

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could

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be and it has been proven that listening to calming

composition

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will nullify any tension

on

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in

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the

cerebrium

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cerebrum

. Without

games

, the mindset of children will most likely

overload

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leading to depression or bad performance in both studies and

every day

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activities In conclusion, using computer

games

as a

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of entertainment has its benefits alongside

with

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apply

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minor

detrimended

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detriment

effects.

This

essay has shown that

clectronicodevices

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electronic devices

are a staple in the

developement

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development

of young people.