You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table illustrates the amount of certain foods and beverages
that
is
sold at various Change the verb form
are
time
in a Fix the agreement mistake
times
coffee
shop in an office building. Overall
, it shows that the sold item
is dominated by coffee
, followed by pastries
, sandwiches, and then
tea.
Based on the table, people tend to order coffee
and pastries
when they are starting their morning at 7:30 until 10:30. It shows that, in this
time
the coffee
usually pair with the pastries
. This
things can be seen by the amount of sales made for this
item
is nearly similar, which is 265 coffee
and 275 pastries
.
When it turn 10:30 to 2:30, mostly, people still choose coffee
for the drinks, but the food is shifted to sandwitches with the sales made for coffee
is 185 cup and for sandwitches are 200 pieces.
Then
, in the lunch until the end of the work time
, which is 2:30 to 5:30, the sold item
pattern is similar with in the morning, where is dominated by the coffee
and the pastries
.
Finally
, after the working time
until the shop is closed, the coffee
is still the most ordered item
, followed by sandwitches, pastries
, and then
tea.Submitted by rlsatria on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, coffee, item, pastries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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