You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.  The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

 The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table illustrates the amount of certain foods and beverages
that
is
Change the verb form
are
show examples
sold at various
time
Fix the agreement mistake
times
show examples
in a
coffee
shop in an office building.
Overall
, it shows that the sold
item
is dominated by
coffee
, followed by
pastries
, sandwiches, and
then
tea. Based on the table, people tend to order
coffee
and
pastries
when they are starting their morning at 7:30 until 10:30. It shows that, in
this
time
the
coffee
usually pair with the
pastries
.
This
things can be seen by the amount of sales made for
this
item
is nearly similar, which is 265
coffee
and 275
pastries
. When it turn 10:30 to 2:30, mostly, people still choose
coffee
for the drinks, but the food is shifted to sandwitches with the sales made for
coffee
is 185 cup and for sandwitches are 200 pieces.
Then
, in the lunch until the end of the work
time
, which is 2:30 to 5:30, the sold
item
pattern is similar with in the morning, where is dominated by the
coffee
and the
pastries
.
Finally
, after the working
time
until the shop is closed, the
coffee
is still the most ordered
item
, followed by sandwitches,
pastries
, and
then
tea.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, coffee, item, pastries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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