The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table illustrates the amount of certain foods and beverages
that
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is
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are
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sold at various
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time
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times
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in a
coffee
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shop in an office building.
Overall
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, it shows that the sold
item
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is dominated by
coffee
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, followed by
pastries
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, sandwiches, and
then
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tea. Based on the table, people tend to order
coffee
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and
pastries
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when they are starting their morning at 7:30 until 10:30. It shows that, in
this
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time
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the
coffee
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usually pair with the
pastries
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.
This
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things can be seen by the amount of sales made for
this
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item
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is nearly similar, which is 265
coffee
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and 275
pastries
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. When it turn 10:30 to 2:30, mostly, people still choose
coffee
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for the drinks, but the food is shifted to sandwitches with the sales made for
coffee
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is 185 cup and for sandwitches are 200 pieces.
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, in the lunch until the end of the work
time
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, which is 2:30 to 5:30, the sold
item
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pattern is similar with in the morning, where is dominated by the
coffee
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and the
pastries
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.
Finally
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, after the working
time
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until the shop is closed, the
coffee
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is still the most ordered
item
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, followed by sandwitches,
pastries
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, and
then
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tea.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, coffee, item, pastries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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