The graph below shows the consumption of fast food( in grams per week) in the UK from 1970 to 1990
The line graph highlights data on how much savoury food was consumed on a weekly basis by
british
citizens over a couple of decades. Units are measured in grams per week.
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Overall
, It is evident from the graph that there have been significant increases in the consumption of Fish and Hamburger
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Hamburgers
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Turning to the details, As for the amount of Fish&Chips consumed by british
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Subsequently
, the figure started to increase, peaking at 500 grams per week in 1990. Meanwhile, the same was true for the trend of Hamburger
. It began at around 50, and Fix the agreement mistake
Hamburgers
then
there was a marginal increase to just above 100 before experiencing a rapid upward trend by
300 in the final year.
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dropped slowly to approximately 200, after which It remained constant at 200 for the rest of the period.Submitted by a_zamjonov99 on
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