The line chart below shows the number of cars produced in three countries from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below shows the number of cars produced in three countries from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart illustrates the
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of cars manufactured in three countries between 2003 and 2009. It can be seen that
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all the figures experienced an upward trend, except for
Argentina
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, which had a reverse pattern could be seen in the number of automobiles produced during the period shown. In 2003,
Argentina
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produced the most cars compared to the other, at 400,
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figure for Australia was lower at 300.
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, motor vehicle production in Thailand was the lowest, about 161. One year later, Thailand and Australia overtook
Argentina
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as the two countries manufactured the most. From 2003 to 2009, the number of cars produced in
Argentina
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fell remarkably and hit a low of 100 in the final year of the period.
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, there was a significant increase in the number of motor vehicles in Thailand
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a peak of 999 in 2009.
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, after increasing minimally in the first 3 years, the automobile industry in Australia witnessed an upsurge from 400 to 1119 in the
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5 years of the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words argentina with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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