The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
This
analytic report provides information pertaining to the six different
cities
'
subway
systems. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it can be seen that the earlier the
subway
system
is constructed, the longer the route is.
Additionally
, it is noteworthy that, despite the fact that the Los Angeles underground train
system
is the newest, its passenger per
year
was almost the lowest among other
cities
. Looking at the figures in
further
detail, it is evident that Tokyo experienced the highest number of
passengers
per
year
, hitting 1927
million
passengers
,
while
the
passengers
per
year
in Paris and London are recorded at 1191
million
and 775
million
passengers
, respectively. With regards to Washington DC, where 144
million
passengers
per
year
opt for it.
Conversely
, the figures for Kyoto and Los Angeles are significantly lower, representing 45 and 50
passengers
in that order. Turning to the remaining statistics, it can be observed that the underground railway
system
of London is the longest route, which obviously dominates the other
cities
at 394 kilometres,
whereas
other
cities
' routes range between 11 kilometres and 127 kilometres. Moving onto the date of opening, Los Angeles has the newest
subway
system
opened in 2001, followed by Kyoto and Washington DC which were inaugurated in 1981 and 1976, respectively.
Moreover
, other
cities
were opening their
subway
systems comparably sooner, ranging from 1963 to 1927.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, subway, system, year, passengers, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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