The pie chart shows the proportion of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. It also indicates the results of surveys asking visitors how they felt about their visit during the same two periods
The pie chart shows the proportion of
visitors
to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. It also
indicates the results of surveys asking visitors
how they felt about their visit during the same two periods. Overall
, there is a development in the total number
of visits and percentage of satisfied and very satisfied answers, while
the proportion of very dissatisfied and dissatisfied respondents decreases. Looking at the details, it is obviously
that the total Change the word
obvious
number
of visitors
significantly increased from 74,000 to 92,000 during the year after the Museum was refurbished. In addition
, comparing the number
of satisfied visitors
we can also
see an upward trend (it increased from 30% and 40% after the refubrishment
). Correct your spelling
refurbishment
Similarly
, the number
of very satisfied visitors
increased by 20%. In contrast
, the percentage of dissatisfaction decreased from 40% to 15%. The number
of dissatisfied decreases halved. While
the number
of unresponse
responses stays the same.Correct your spelling
unresponsive
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