The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

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The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the

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cement making

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cement-making

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process, and how

cement

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is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

Cement

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production

beginning

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begins

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from crushing the limestone and clay. From

this

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stage, the limestone and clay are powder now. Mixed and going to

rotating

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rotate

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. And it's how the limestone and clay becomes

cement

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Then

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cement

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is packed into bags. There are four ingredients for concrete production

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apply

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cement

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(15%), water (10%), sand (25%) and gravel (50%). These four ingredients

mixing

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are mixed

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concrete

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a concrete

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mixer. And throughout these

stages

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stages,

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we get a finished product.

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Linking words: Add some linking words.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cement with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

97 words

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The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others, however, say that cooperation and team working skills are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people believe that after a child enters school their teachers will have more influence than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

More and more business meetings and business training have taken place on the Internet. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that children should be involved in making schools' rules. Some argue that adults should be in charge of making rules. Discuss both view and give your opinion.