The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the
cement making
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cement-making
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process, and how
cement
is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
Cement
production
beginning
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begins
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from crushing the limestone and clay. From
this
stage, the limestone and clay are powder now. Mixed and going to
rotating
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. And it's how the limestone and clay becomes
cement
.
Then
cement
is packed into bags. There are four ingredients for concrete production
is
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cement
(15%), water (10%), sand (25%) and gravel (50%). These four ingredients
mixing
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on
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in
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concrete
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a concrete
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mixer. And throughout these
stages
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stages,
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we get a finished product.
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