The firs t chart below shows how energy is used in an average A ustralian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas em issions which result from this energy use. Summarise the inform ation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make com parisons where relevant
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The pie
graph
depicts the comparation
between how Correct your spelling
comparison
energy
is used in average
Australian household and Correct article usage
the average
greenhouse
gas emission
.
As we can notice, there is a big difference between the two graphs, which is the percentage of how much Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
energy
was caused by using heating, with 42% of the total in average
house and only 15% of the total in Correct article usage
the average
greenhouse
. There is not a big deal between the Add an article
the greenhouse
a greenhouse
energy
used by water heating, with the number remain
around 30%. The percentage of refrigeration in Wrong verb form
remaining
greenhouse
is two times more than that in Add an article
the greenhouse
a greenhouse
average
house, Add an article
the average
an average
were
14% and 7%. Another obvious difference we will notice is the cost of other appliances, with 15% in the first Unnecessary verb
apply
graph
and 28% in the second graph
, which is nearly two times’
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times
growth
. Meanwhile, the Correct article usage
the growth
energy
usage of cooling and lighting remain
stable, with the number under 10%.
After all, the pie Correct subject-verb agreement
remains
graph
clearly demonstrate
that Change the verb form
demonstrates
greenhouse
has a great influence on reducing the Correct article usage
the greenhouse
energy
of heating. Meanwhile
the usage of cooling, lighting ,Add a comma
Meanwhile,
water
heating Correct word choice
and water
remain
stable. Change the verb form
remains
However
, the percentage of other appliances and refrigeration witness
a Wrong verb form
witnessed
clearly
rise.Change the adverb
clear
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