The bar chart shows the types of media that people of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the types of media that people of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Contained in the bar chart is data regarding the proportions of three media categories utilized by
individuals
across five different
age
groups
to access news regularly within a nation during 2011.
Overall
, the data indicates that
radio
was widely used across all
age
groups
, except for
individuals
aged 10 to 17. Interestingly, the percentage of
individuals
in both the 10-17 and 18-19
age
brackets was exactly equal. Regarding social networking, the
usage
rate among
individuals
in the first two
age
groups
stood at 80%, which was 30% higher than that of
individuals
aged 30 to 49 and twice as much as those aged 50-64.
Additionally
,
individuals
aged 65 and above witnessed the least
usage
, approximately 25%. Meanwhile, microblogging had the lowest
usage
rates, ranging from 10% to around 24% across all
age
groups
. Transitioning to
radio
usage
, it's evident that adults were frequent users,
whereas
usage
among younger
individuals
was comparatively lower. Specifically,
radio
was most popular among
individuals
aged 18 to 29, with over 90%
usage
.
This
trend was consistent across three other
age
groups
: those aged 30-49, 50-64, and 65 and over, with
usage
rates approximately around 90%, below 90%, and roughly 85%, respectively.
Conversely
, the youngest
age
group exhibited the lowest
radio
usage
, standing precisely at 10%, compared to the other four
groups
.
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