The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
analytic report provides information pertaining to changes which happened in Central Library
from 20 years ago until the present day.
Overall
, it can be seen that the public library
has undergone a complete transformation with room
expansions, as well as
all the spaces are repurposed to incorporate new facilities. Additionally
, The centre tables and chairs were demolished in order to create an open space.
Looking at the left-hand area
of the library
, it is evident that the room
which contained CDs, videos and computer games was repurposed into a children's activity area
where now kids can sit on the sofa and enjoy reading fiction books
or join storytelling events. Moreover
, the reading room
which involved newspapers and magazines was replaced with a computer room
, as well as
the adult fiction books
areas concerned, it was replaced by all reference books
.
Moving onto the right-hand side of the Central Library
, it can be seen that the children's books
area
was redeveloped with a lecture room
. Subsequently
, the adult non-fiction books
area
was replaced by the adult fiction books
, as well as
new facilities were added, for instance
, an information desk and self-service machines. Furthermore
, the enquiry desk which used to provide tickets or return books
, now be replaced with a coffee shop. Finally
, in the centre of the library
, the tables and chairs were removed to create an open space area
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