The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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analytic report provides information pertaining to changes which happened in Central Linking Words
Library
from 20 years ago until the present day.
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Overall
, it can be seen that the public Linking Words
library
has undergone a complete transformation with Use synonyms
room
expansions, Use synonyms
as well as
all the spaces are repurposed to incorporate new facilities. Linking Words
Additionally
, The centre tables and chairs were demolished in order to create an open space.
Looking at the left-hand Linking Words
area
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library
, it is evident that the Use synonyms
room
which contained CDs, videos and computer games was repurposed into a children's activity Use synonyms
area
where now kids can sit on the sofa and enjoy reading fiction Use synonyms
books
or join storytelling events. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the reading Linking Words
room
which involved newspapers and magazines was replaced with a computer Use synonyms
room
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as well as
the adult fiction Linking Words
books
areas concerned, it was replaced by all reference Use synonyms
books
.
Moving onto the right-hand side of the Central Use synonyms
Library
, it can be seen that the children's Use synonyms
books
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area
was redeveloped with a lecture Use synonyms
room
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Subsequently
, the adult non-fiction Linking Words
books
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area
was replaced by the adult fiction Use synonyms
books
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as well as
new facilities were added, Linking Words
for instance
, an information desk and self-service machines. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the enquiry desk which used to provide tickets or return Linking Words
books
, now be replaced with a coffee shop. Use synonyms
Finally
, in the centre of the Linking Words
library
, the tables and chairs were removed to create an open space Use synonyms
area
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