The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the Unitedv Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Contained in the given line graph is data related to the CO2
emissions
gas
which
released by people in four specific countries from 1967 to 2007.
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Overall
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perceived
perceive
while
the carbon dioxide released by Italy and Portugal increased throughout the period, there was an opposite trend for UK
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the UK
as well as
Sweden. Additionally
, even though the emissions
gas
came from the United Kingdom decreased all the time, it still remained Change preposition
of gas
as
the country with the most CO2 Change preposition
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emissions
.
With regards to the two countries which saw a rise in the gas
emissions
, Italy along with
Portugal stood at nearly 4 metric tonnes
and about 1.2 metric tonnes
at
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gas
emissions
, it
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tonnes
to over 6 metric tonnes
before remaining steady to
1987 with the same amount , after Change preposition
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tonnes
at the end
of the period. Meanwhile, the carbon dioxide in Portugal experienced a significant increase between 1.2 metric tonnes
and nearly 5metric
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5 metric
tonnes
, then
it reaches
a plateau until 2007.
Turning towards the remaining nations that had a decline in Wrong verb form
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emissions
gas
, for United Kingdom, it
only saw a decrease throughout the timeframe, going down from approximately 11 metric Correct pronoun usage
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tonnes
to under 10 metric tonnes
between 1967 and 2007. By contrast
, Sweden's CO2 emissions
rose dramatically from about 8.5 metric tonnes
to more than 10 metric tonnes
, however
, it soon not only declined significantly to under 5 metric tonnes
, but it was also
exceeded by Portugal.Submitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
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