The chart below shows the total number of hours per month from 1980 to 2015 that people in the USA used modern technology divided into four categories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph chart depicts the
the
average trip distance per Remove the redundancy
apply
miles
among the United States kids aged 5 to 15 years old, illustrating how Fix the agreement mistake
mile
miles
they were passed by multiple methods.
At one glance, it could be revealed that attempt
to Wrong verb form
attempting
trip
Verb problem
travel
with
Change preposition
by
bus
was the Add an article
the bus
favourate
way to in the U.S Correct your spelling
favourite
whereas
, walking was the least selective choice.
From 1970 until 2020 , bus
was the best Add an article
the bus
periority
Correct your spelling
priority
to traveled
children. In 1970, children went by Change preposition
for traveling
bus
about
Change preposition
for about
average
Correct article usage
an average
28
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of 28
miles
. The numbers were not fell
over the decades and still Wrong verb form
fallen
bus
had Fix the agreement mistake
buses
the
peak point in 2020. Correct article usage
a
While
cycling was the same number as the bus
average in 1970, it declined under
20 Change preposition
to under
miles
in 2020. The least
item Correct your spelling
last
on
1970 by under 7 Change preposition
in
miles
was taxi
was shockingly rocketed to 20 Correct article usage
a taxi
miles
in 2020.
Overall
, children were chosen vehicle items to went
to their destination more than items which need to be motivated and burnt energy.Wrong verb form
go
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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