The graph below shows the results of a survey on the percentage of people who drank soft drinks every day over 7 day period in 2019 in the 4 countries of the United Kingdom.

The graph below shows the results of a survey on the percentage of people who drank soft drinks every day over 7 day period in 2019 in the 4 countries of the United Kingdom.
The provided table illustrates information pertaining to the female proportion of the population in various areas between 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, the percentage of Africa and Europe experienced an upward trend,
whereas
the opposite was true for Asia, North
America
, Central
America
, and Oceania seeing a downward trend during the period of time.
Additionally
, the proportion of Asia remained the highest throughout the time frame. Looking at the statistics for Africa in
further
detail, it increased slightly from nearly 98 to 99%.
Similarly
, Europe witnessed a slight increase to roughly 93 from 98%. Turning to the female percentage in Asia, it decreased slowly from 105.3% to around 104%, making it the highest proportion of females in the population among areas.
Similarly
, the population rate of females in North
America
, Central
America
, and Oceania declined gradually from around 100, exactly 100, and approximately 104 to nearly 97, 97.5, and just under 100%, respectively.
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