The map shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Contained in the floorplans is information pertaining to the comparison of
Correct article usage
the library'
library'
Change noun form
library
s
ground floor between 2001 and 2009.
Change preposition
's
Overall
, it can be seen that the Linking Words
books
Use synonyms
sectors
has been reconstructed in order to leave spaces for new genres, Fix the agreement mistake
sector
while
technological amenities have Linking Words
been
replaced the news area. Unnecessary verb
apply
Additionally
, despite various changes not only Linking Words
the
location of Change preposition
in the
books
, but Use synonyms
also
Linking Words
the
technological facilities, the span of the building remained Change preposition
in the
no changed
.
Looking at the book sectors where there was an alteration not only the additional Rephrase
unchanged
books
, but they were Use synonyms
also
relocated. To the west, in 2001 where it used to have only self-help in conjunction with history Linking Words
books
, Use synonyms
Linking Words
however
in 2009, the social science Add a comma
however,
along with
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households
Change the noun form
household
books
were included Use synonyms
into
the bookshelf. To the north, the children part has replaced the old fiction Change preposition
in
books
.
Turning to the remaining area Use synonyms
with
the separated tables being merged into rows in the Change preposition
apply
center
of the building Change the spelling
centre
while
the newspaper and periodical shelves have been transformed into the media sector with new computers.Linking Words
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