The bar charts show the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
The diagram
illustrated
the amount of people who consumed five portions of vegetables and fruits each day in the United Kingdom between 2001 and 2008. The unit Wrong verb form
illustrates
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is measure
measure
in percentage.
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measured
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it can be seen that,
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a woman
the woman
woman
from 2001 to 2008 always Fix the agreement mistake
women
keep
the highest percentage, Wrong verb form
kept
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children at the lowest but it got an increase from these years. Correct your spelling
with
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gets
from
2001 and 2008.
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between
woman
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begin
at a quarter in 2001 and Wrong verb form
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reach
a peak at around 34% in 2006 before it dropped slightly to nearly 30% in 2008.
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reached
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the woman
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women
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men
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remain
at approximately 17% between 2001 and 2003. After Wrong verb form
remained
that
it rose significantly to 26% in 2007 and declined slowly to 25% in 2008. Add a comma
that,
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which
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at 13% Wrong verb form
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increased
rapidly to around 25% in 2008.Correct word choice
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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