The maps show a present layout of an office building and plan for its future redevelopment

The maps show a present layout of an office building and plan for its future redevelopment
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The drawings indicate a floorplan of an office building now and what it will look like after the reconstruction. As illustrated from the maps, the noticeable development of the building is the removal of culinary facilities.
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, only the warehouse is anticipated to remain unchanged after the redevelopment. On examining the upper half of the building, to the top of the building lay a kitchen and a canteen, which are predicted to be wiped out to make way for the new offices.
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, the restroom opposite the storeroom is forecasted to be moved to the upper right-hand corner,
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the entrance which is on the left will stay at the same place. With respect to the lower half part of the building, the wall on the right will be removed to expand the area,
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simultaneously the two patches of the garden on either side of the building are going to be destroyed to construct an outdoor setting area and meeting area. More noteworthily, the row of offices will be integrated into 2 big ones and there will be a newly relocated entrance between them.

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