The diagram shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

The diagram shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.
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The illustration indicates the cycle of
water
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by which moves on, above, and below the surface of the Earth.
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, it can be seen that the
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cycle on the Earth starts with the sun shining and ends with
water
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evaporation. Looking at the details, it is evident that at
first,
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the sun shines on the rivers, lakes, and oceans, which evaporates the
water
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and contributes 80% of
water
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vapours in the air. After that, the
water
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vapour condenses and forms a cloud, which is capable of precipitation and snow. In detail, it can be seen that after precipitation on the Earth, some of the
water
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goes into the rivers, lakes and oceans or runoff on the surface,
while
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other goes into the impervious layers.
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, it appears from the diagram that all
this
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water
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goes into the ocean and evaporates to form a cloud, and
this
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cycle continues.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • evaporation
  • transpiration
  • condensation
  • precipitation
  • aquifers
  • percolation
  • surface runoff
  • replenishing
  • infiltrates
  • atmosphere
  • vapor
  • liquid
  • cycle
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