The diagram shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.
The illustration indicates the cycle of
water
by which moves on, above, and below the surface of the Earth.
Overall
, it can be seen that the water
cycle on the Earth starts with the sun shining and ends with water
evaporation.
Looking at the details, it is evident that at first,
the sun shines on the rivers, lakes, and oceans, which evaporates the water
and contributes 80% of water
vapours in the air. After that, the water
vapour condenses and forms a cloud, which is capable of precipitation and snow.
In detail, it can be seen that after precipitation on the Earth, some of the water
goes into the rivers, lakes and oceans or runoff on the surface, while
other goes into the impervious layers. Finally
, it appears from the diagram that all this
water
goes into the ocean and evaporates to form a cloud, and this
cycle continues.Submitted by Shahdadi.m76 on
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