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The chart belowngiving information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart belowngiving information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
proportion
 of British individuals spending money
to
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 charity by different
age
 groups in 1990 and 2010. It is clear from the graph that the highest
of
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pecentage
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percentage
 is the
age
 category between 36 and 50 in 1990,
while
 the lowest
of
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percentage is
age
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the age
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group
 from 18 to 25 in 2010.
According to
 what is shown, the
proportion
 of spending
age
 groups between 18 and 50 in1990 decreased. The percentage of the
age
group
 between 36 and 50 in 1990 was around 40 per
cent
, whilst in 2010 was at 30 per
cent
. The
proportion
 of
age
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group
 from 18 to 25 in 2010 was approximately 5 per
cent
in
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spit of 1990 was about 16 per
cent
.
In addition
, the percentage of the
age
 category from 51 and above increased between 1990 and 2010. The
proportion
 of the
age
group
 between 51 and 65 in 2010 was higher than in 1990 by 5
per
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per cent
cen
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cent
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charitable donations
  • age range/bracket/group
  • percentage (%)
  • 20-year period
  • British people
  • trends
  • increase/decrease
  • significant change
  • donation patterns
  • remained stable
  • highest/lowest
  • observe
  • compare
  • summarize
  • comment on
  • relevant features
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