The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given maps give information about the shifts occurring in Lynwich

College

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from 2006 to today.

Overall

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it is clear that

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the

college

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has been upgraded with more facilities in terms of transportation, recreation and beverage.

In addition

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, it can

also

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be noted that there has been a reduction in the size of green space in

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to extend road infrastructure and better serve the students. Looking at the upper part of

the

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Lynwich

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, it can be observed that there

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been more transport options by

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road as there used to be solely a car park in 2006. Now, with the car park being miniaturized by half of its size,

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storage for bikes has

then

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been installed next to it

along with

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the construction of a bus stop on the other side. For better access to them, roads branching from the newly built cafeteria which is now located in the

center

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of the

college

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paved directly to those amenities for transportation. Moving to the other part of the

college

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, it can be seen that

although

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the

college

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buildings and the sports field remain intact, other facilities are spotted to be either relocated or recently added. Regarding the library, even though in 2006, it used to be adjacent to the car park, in

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the present

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present day

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it has

then

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been moved to the vacant space between the teaching buildings where trees had to be

cutted

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down. In order to create an active lifestyle for the students, a sports

center

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was constructed

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where the library was, contiguous to the other recreational field.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words college with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

264 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

underwent significant changes
consisted of
large open space
utilized
relocated
limited facilities and amenities
wider range of facilities and amenities

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