The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Presented for consideration
is
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the changes which happened in Lynwich College from 2006 until the present day.
Overall
, new infrastructures have been built inside the area to provide a better studying environment for students. Other than that, a centralized road network provides ease of access to the various buildings which was lacking in the past. Looking into details, a new bus stop has been constructed adjacent to the main road which occupies some land space of the school. The car park has been redesigned in
such
a way that some areas have been allocated for bikes.
Moreover
, a centralized cafeteria is standing to serve all the people inside to buy their necessities. It is interesting to note that,
although
college buildings 1 and 2 are still there, a few trees in the southwest area of the land have been cut in order to shift the library to provide access from both of the school buildings.
Additionally
, now there is a sports centre erected in the northern part of the field, in between the playground and the carpark to facilitate more pupils to engage in sports activities.
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  • underwent significant changes
  • consisted of
  • large open space
  • utilized
  • relocated
  • limited facilities and amenities
  • wider range of facilities and amenities
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