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The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two graphs compare the relationship between
age
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 and
crime
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, and the types of
crime
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 in the UK
last
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 year.
Overall
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, it is shown that most crimes occurred by people who were between 12 and 28 years old,
while
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 the most common type of
crime
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 was violent crimes. To start with, in the line graph, we can observe that there was a slight increase from 0% to 5% roughly from criminals between 8 and 12 years old. After that, a sharp rise happened from 5% to 80% when it peaked. The
age
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 of criminals for
this
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 trend was between 12 and 20.
In addition
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, the
crime
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 rate declined significantly until the
age
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 of 28 and
then
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 with an almost steady route it reached approximately 8% at the
age
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 of 60.
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, in the pie chart, we can see that violent
crime
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 was over the other crimes at 46%
whereas
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 public order
crime
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 has the lowest figure at 9%.
Finally
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, property
crime
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 and drug
crime
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 had similar percentages at 23% and 22% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, crime with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • The line graph depicts
  • The pie chart illustrates
  • reveals
  • displays
  • depicts
  • the trend of
  • the overall crime rate
  • steadily decreased
  • the distribution of
  • different types of crime
  • prevalent
  • accounts for
  • the most common crime
  • followed by
  • make up
  • a smaller proportion of
  • the total crimes
  • a smaller percentage
  • approximately
  • the remaining percentage
  • It is important to note that
  • reflects
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