The two line graphs illustrate the activities done by British graduate and postgraduate students if they did not find a full-time occupation after their university, in 2008.
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students, and the majority of them continued their studies to higher levels, Correct your spelling
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while
, the minority of them did some voluntary tasks.
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the data, both categories followed approximately the same patternsLinking Words
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but were different in numbers. In the first group, around 30.000 of the graduated individuals pursued their studies to get higher degrees, and the number of people who had part-time jobs and the ones who did not have a career was roughly the same, the former 17.735 and the latter 16.235. Remove the comma
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Whereas
, just 3.500 of Linking Words
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group preferred to do some voluntary work.
Turning to the second graph, the highest proportion of Linking Words
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students decided to continue their college or become part-time employees, 2.725 and 2.535, respectively. About half of the population remained jobless in 2008, and only 345 of them did some voluntary work.Correct your spelling
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