You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar graph showcases statistics for the number of traumas and accidents encountered for every 100 million miles travelled using various means of transport in 2002.
Generally, the most common incidents following injuries are demand response ,
whereas
the least known is commuter rail. Interestingly , not each of the occurrences leads to such
. Furthermore
, no carriage made a heavier scenario.
While
observing more deeply, heavy rail and bus had an almost similar script, however
, the number of maims after transporting people
on average per 100 million people
exceeds 39, and equals 66 people
.
Other types of train forces used had fewer patients approximately in the proportion 30:52. Despite this
low rate of these actions, respondent travellers went through the events the most , about 225 units.
In conclusion , this
data informates the spread of the amount of impact done by different vehicle kinds ,in 2002 . This
chart makes an average percentage according to
the number of people
involved.Submitted by rashadyus10 on
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