Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available Begin your letter as follows: Dear …………….,
Dear modem,
I am writing
this
letter with regard that i
will help you about you chore in your hose for a few house
Change the capitalization
I
i
would like you to do two Change the capitalization
I
somthing
in your Correct your spelling
something
home
, fisrt
is you can stay Correct your spelling
first
in
my house for minutes and you can leave your Change preposition
at
home
for a moment or stay in hotel
.Correct article usage
a hotel
This
is because of
your place will clean up all from your living Change preposition
apply
rooms
Fix the agreement mistake
room
untill
Correct your spelling
until
you
Correct pronoun usage
your
kithchen
.Correct your spelling
kitchen
Also
it is Add a comma
Also,
verry
dirty when Correct your spelling
very
i
come Change the capitalization
I
in
into your Change preposition
apply
home
.
Two weeks ago the owner of your home
have
asked me Unnecessary verb
apply
for doing
it,Change preposition
to do
from
Change preposition
to
sweep
your garden,yard and all of your Change the verb form
sweeping
place
.Change to a plural noun
places
Moreover
Add a comma
Moreover,
this
house was leaving
for Change the form of the verb
left
long
time and it was Change the article
a long
Correct your spelling
very
verry
inconvenient for living a long term,and many of trash that Correct your spelling
very
i
will through to the Change the capitalization
I
rubbishbox
Correct your spelling
rubbish box
i
will be able Change the capitalization
I
do
Add the particle
to do
this
for
Change preposition
apply
this
time due to
my job was finished last
time and i
Change the capitalization
I
fell
free Correct your spelling
feel
know
,but if you will ask me in Correct your spelling
now
afternoon
might i have Add an article
the afternoon
extra
job Correct article usage
an extra
froom
my boss so Correct your spelling
from
i
Change the capitalization
I
prefer
do Add the particle
prefer to
this
in
Change preposition
apply
this
morning.Moreover
know
Verb problem
apply
i
have many friends Change the capitalization
I
for
help me to do Correct pronoun usage
who for
this
,so do not worry about it.
Thank you so much for your attention in advance, I look forward to hearing from you too soon
Your sicerely
Correct your spelling
sincerely
abi
Change the capitalization
Abi
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greeting and closing
Ensure to address the recipient correctly in the greeting. In this case, use 'Dear Mrs Barrett,' instead of 'Dear modem,'.
complete response
Check spelling and grammar thoroughly. For instance, 'house' instead of 'hose' and 'hours' instead of 'house'.
logical structure
Make your sentences clear and precise. Avoid unnecessary repetition and elaborate on your points more coherently.
logical structure
Use separate paragraphs for each of the main points you are addressing to improve clarity and cohesion.
suitable writing tone
Adopt a more formal tone to match the conventional style of a letter applying for a job or work opportunity. For instance, avoid phrases like 'Thank you so much'. Instead, you could say, 'Thank you for considering my application.'
complete response
You've attempted to cover all the points mentioned in the prompt - how you can help, why you want to do the work, and your availability.
greeting and closing
You've used a polite closing which is important in such letters.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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