The graph below shows the percentage of workers from five different European countries that were absent for a day or more due to illness from 1991 to 2001. Summarise the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart provides information about how many employees who absent because of sickness between 1991 and 2001.
Overall
, there was an increase in the proportion of people
who have days off due to
illness in the Netherlands
, Sweden and the UK, with the figure for the Netherlands
being generally highest, except for 1991. In addition
, Germany had the lowest of people
who were absent because of this
reason, and the data of this
country was also
converse with the UK throughout the period.
Looking first at the rise areas, at the beginning of the time frame, the share of people
with illness absence in the Netherlands
was smaller than in France
, at 4,9%. After that, it surpassed this
nation to grow to 5,5% in the next year, before falling strongly to just over 4% in 1996 and bouncing to a peak of 5,5% at the end
of the period. A similar change, but to a lesser extent, was seen in Sweden with the figure starting at exactly 3% and hovering at this
number in the next 5 years. From 1996 onwards, it surpassed France
to gain second status and increased significantly to 4,5% in 2001. A rise, but negligible, was also
seen in the percentage of employees who had days off because of sickness in the UK, with the cycle of the fluctuation that hovered around 2% being repeated according SIN diagram.
Turning to the remaining areas, France
had the highest figure at the beginning of the period. Although
this
proportion was maintained in the next year, France
still was surpassed by the Netherlands
to get the second position. From that point onwards, the share of people
with illness absence in this
country dropped sharply, even it
was lower than in Sweden in 1996. It kept the third position throughout the remaining stage and reached a trough of exactly 3% in 2001. Correct word choice
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Conversely
, the data in Germany was quite steady, hovering 2% from 1991 to 2001.Submitted by phuongdong.nguyentran on
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