The chart below shows the percentage of male and female who did various free-time activities in England

The chart below shows the percentage of male and female who did various free-time activities in England
The chart depicts the proportion of individuals of both genders who did diversified spare time activities in England. The units are measured in
percentage
.
Overall
, it can be seen that the majority of people who used the internet were male,
whereas
, the opposite was true for females.
Additionally
,
men
and
women
have the same
percentage
in
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watching TV, spending time with family, doing sports and reading. Examining for
further
detail, regarding watching TV, the
percentage
of
women
was over 75%, which was lower than
men
by 2%. The proportion of both
men
and
women
watching television was similar to spending time with family category.
Moreover
, the proportion of
men
doing exercise was 75%, which was higher than
women
, by 4%. There was a similarity in the ratio of doing sport and reading by both genders. Turning back to the remaining statistics, there were two large disparities between
men
and
women
in shopping and using the Internet. Regarding shopping, the
percentage
of
women
was about 75%, which is significantly higher than
men
by over 45%.
In contrast
, the ratio of
women
using the internet was approximately 40%, which is lower than
men
over 30%.
Furthermore
,
men
had a higher rate of
women
playing computer games, by 6%.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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