The diagram below shows the production of olive oil.
The infographic illustrates the
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production. Looking at it from an Use synonyms
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perspective, it's evident that there are 7 main steps to create an olive Linking Words
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product. Use synonyms
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process
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fruits
are harvested from the tree and culminates when the Use synonyms
oil
and water in the Use synonyms
fruits
are separated. Use synonyms
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In the initial stage, mature olive Use synonyms
fruits
are harvested by farmers and put in baskets. In the subsequent step, these freshly picked Use synonyms
fruits
are transported to the factory for manufacturing purposes. In Use synonyms
this
stage, the Linking Words
fruits
are put in a rinsing machine where they undergo cold fresh water. Use synonyms
Then
, these olive Linking Words
fruits
are transported using a conveyor belt. Use synonyms
Moreover
, in the next step, these Linking Words
fruits
are smashed by a smasher, resulting in olive paste and olive stones being separated.
Moving on to the remaining steps, olive paste is packed into large bags. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, these bags are pressed by a pressing machine. In the penultimate stage, Linking Words
oil
and water are carefully separated by a large machine. The Use synonyms
process
terminates when olive Use synonyms
oil
is stored and ready for sale.Use synonyms
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