the diagram below shows how drinlking water is made using solar power

the diagram below shows how drinlking water is made using solar power
The given graphic hereunder illustrates the production of
water
using
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to drink by solar powered pump and filter. The process consists of
serveral
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several
main steps,beginning with the collection
sunlight
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with a solar
panel
, converting it into electricity, pumping
water
into a tank, and purifying the
water
before storing it in a movable container. The initial phrases focus on solar
panel
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is
taken
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sunlight from the sun and
transmitted
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that energy to the convert. Looking clearly at the details, the solar
panel
is strategically placed on a pole to face the sun and it is fixed above the ground. The sun’s enormous heat energy will be converted into electricity after being collected by the solar
panel
. It
then
forces natural
water
from an underground well
coming
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up the pipe which runs on electricity.
This
pipe connects the pump with a filter, whose function is to purify natural
water
and make it drinkable. In the next
phrases
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, the
water
will undergo a purification stage through a
water
tank by using the filter system
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upon the wooden
flatform
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platform
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. The final stage is that decontaminated
water
is contained in a moveable container providing a dependable and eco-friendly
water
delivery system for communities.
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