The ownership of car should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A lot of

people

believe that each family just have a

car

in order to decrease

traffic

jam

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jams

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and

overpollution

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pollution

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.

This

writer agrees that the less transportation

people

have, the cleaner

environment

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was

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is

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. First of all,

car

reduce

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may enhance the

air

become

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to become

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clean and peaceful. When the

car

have

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been declined, there is no more congestion, the

traffic

would be wider and it may not threaten to the

atmosphere

.

Moreover

, family contain less transport can save

their

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apply

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money to do

another works

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.

For instance

, workers when they have

own

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their own

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car

they

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apply

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have to spend money to buy fossil fuel for it and it may be

waste

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a waste

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money

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of money

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.

Thus

, it is a significant thing to do to protect our life in

modern

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the modern

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era.

Secondly

,

reduce

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reducing

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number

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of cars will reduce waste of the toxic gas

into

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in

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the

air

.

As well as

transports

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transport

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in the world,

car

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cars

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also

waste gas which

threaten

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to

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apply

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the

atmosphere

such

as carbon dioxide,

sulfur

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and sulfur

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dioxide and these

gas

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gases

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may cause

air

pollution in

the

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society.

However

, because of

encourage

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car

reduce

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reduction

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, the

air

would be safer and cleaner for

the

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people's breathe

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people

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.Nowadays, a lot of companies produce electric cars to

safe

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save

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the environment

as

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and

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reduce pollution and

traffic

jam

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jams

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.So,

people

have to follow and accept the rules to make the world become healthier. In conclusion, the

air

and

atmosphere

are now threatening and it

also

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an

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a

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significant problem in the world. the act of

reduce

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reducing

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car

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cars

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is one of the most important things in

this

era, it

also

reduce

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reduces

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the

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apply

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traffic

jam

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jams

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and

make

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makes

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the

atmosphere

become

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apply

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cleaner.