The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
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The bar charts show the percentage of
people
who owned computers
as well as
the figure was more specifically education level over an 8 year
period from 2002 to 2010.
Add a hyphen
8-year
Overall
, the general trend of computer ownership was upwards
, and it ended the year at 75% in 2010. For five of the education levels, it is obvious that the majority of computer owners had a Correct your spelling
upward
Master
and Doctoral degree Change noun form
Master's
while
a group of people
who did not have a high school diploma possessed the lowest number of computers
.
Looking into details, the percentage of people
belonging to computers
gradually increased from approximately 55% in 2002 to 75% in 2010. It is interesting to note that the number of people
who did not receive high school and high school graduated grew almost twofold while
an average of students in college, undergraduate and postgraduate degree
had Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
computers
which rose approximately 20-30%, compared with in 2002 and in 2010.Submitted by kanchanakularathna1991 on
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