The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billion) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billion) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
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The chart shows the time spent by UK residents on different types of telephone calls between 1995 and 2002. Local
fixed line
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calls were the highest throughout the period, rising from 72
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minutes in 1995 to just under 90
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in 1998. After peaking at 90
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the following year, these calls had fallen back to the 1995 figure by 2002. National and international fixed line calls grew steadily from 38
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to 61
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at the end
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of the period in question, though the growth slowed over the
last
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two years. There was a dramatic increase in mobile calls from 2
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to 46
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minutes.
This
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rise was particularly noticeable between 1999 and 2002, during which time the use of mobile phones tripled.
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local fixed line calls were still the most popular in 2002, the gap between the three categories had narrowed considerably over the second half of the period in question.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Telecommunications
  • Long-distance calls
  • Local calls
  • International calls
  • Duration
  • Fluctuation
  • Incline/Decline
  • Significant
  • Trend
  • Statistical data
  • Billion
  • Minutes
  • Graph/chart interpretation
  • Incremental growth
  • Stabilize
  • Peak
  • Dip
  • Plummet
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