The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant
The
salmon
life cycle is depicted in the diagram below, which belongs to a group of huge fish
.
Overall
, it is a straightforward cynical process with the baby fish
born in the river
and feeding on the water plants there before moving to the sea when it is fully grown up, which then
moves back to the river
to start a new cycle. Additionally
, the length of salmon
increases significantly throughout its life.
Initially
, salmon
eggs are laid on mini-sized rocks surrounded by reeds in order for fries to reach to
the available foods Change preposition
apply
as well as
to ensure a slight flow of the river
which is needed for the newborns to survive. After
this
5 or 6-month period, the fish
starts to move to the lower part of rivers where it lives there for about 4 years in a quick-moving environment. Meanwhile, the size of the fish
will grow until it reaches a maximum of 15 cm in this
stage and is going to be called a smolt.
Subsequently
, these smolts will migrate to the ocean to spend the next 5 years of their life and be declared adult salmon
that can be over 70 cm long. Finally
, at breeding seasons the fish
has to go back to the upper river
so as to lay eggs safely and begin another cycle.Submitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
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