The line graph shows the percentage of renewable energy generation over total energy produced in 6 countries from 2010 to 2013.

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The chart illustrates how much electricity in six countries was produced from renewable

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between 2010 and 2013.

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, there was an increase in the percentage of energy production coming from renewable

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in all six countries examined, with the most dramatic rise being seen in Germany.

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mid 2010

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onwards. The percentage of energy generated from renewable

sources

in the USA started at about 19%, after which it saw a decline to reach a low of around 13%, before increasing to just over 20% in 2012 and 2013. Similar changes can be seen in the figure for India, declining from approximately 17% to 16%

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after the first year and recovering back to its initial figure in 2010. About 17% of the USA's electricity production came from renewable

sources

of energy, with a subsequent considerable rise

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% in 2013. The figures for Spain, France and China saw smaller rises of about 2%, ending at just over 15%, 15%, and 12.5% respectively.

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